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Break It All Away

why you always suffocate in these walls,
which trample your good feelings and thoughts,
and then make your tears come out and fall,
and you feel no one listens to your wails and calls,
why you feel this world would never change,
everything appears to you broken,hopeless and strange,
why you let your depression stick to yourself,
you remain sunk in the blues until the clock says twelve,

remember,no one can bring happiness except you,
all the joy and bliss slumbers deep inside you,
wake it up,bring your sanity in motion,
get rid of the blues and depressing emotions,
let life infuse in yourself and then sway,
the blues,depression and sadness,just break it all away.....

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Written November 4th, 2006

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  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    December 2, 2006

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    Thoughtful

    I assume this is a personal poem, if it is, you can get rid of the depressive feelings. I like this because it has a positive feel to it. I look forward to reading more from you....Sue


  • the-enigma
    November 5, 2006
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    good job

    this is very good i love reading your work you got something going for you this poem speaks to me its very well written keep doing what your doing