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This Is Who I Am

sometimes i feel so happy,
sometimes i am kind of sad,
at times i hang by a thread,
sometimes i am soaked glad,
sometimes i feel like I'm outrageous,
sometimes i think 'am i really mad'?
sometimes i feel like a writer,
but at times the stuff i write seems so bad,

but i really don't care,i swear,
this is the way i am,
i live the way i want to,
and this is who i am,

sometimes lots of friends surge towards me,
sometimes m not even able 2 catch up with 2 or 3,
sometimes m having the best days of my life,
but sometimes pain swells inside me,
then i cannot fight free,
people usually marvel at my looks,
but sometimes i think i am the most ugly,

but i really don't care,i swear,
this is the way i am,
i live the way i want to,
and this is who i am,

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Written November 4th, 2006

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  • the-enigma
    November 4, 2006
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    well written

    wow i like who you are just by reading this peice of work its like really good you write very well but dont be to hard and down on yourself things will be better


  • Snappy - Doodles
    November 4, 2006
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    All of the descriptions are very nice of descriping who you are. They give the reader a clear and precise picture. Very strong and powerful write.