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Two hot to handle

Steamy windows cloud my view,

but the outline of venus I see.

A naked curvaceous form.

head held back with hair trailing in

untouchable soft curls.

Her hands fondle her body

as she massages oil into her skin,

One can almost inhale the hypnotic fragrance.


Dare I open the door,

what delights linger before me?

My imagination even now 

goes into exotic thoughts.


Wait!!


She is rubbing the glass to clear the mist,

her long finger beckons,

tantilizing my mood.

Oh! the urgency of need to touch,

to caress her alluring essence.

Slowly the door opens without my participation,

modestly I step inside.

Self concious of my sexual arrousal,

I accept the smile offered.

My vision is of perfection,

firm breast with errect nipples

attract my gaze.

A sultry temptress voice breaks the silence.


Close the door honey. 

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Written November 4th, 2006

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  • Truthful Princess
    December 15, 2006

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    Hmm

    I dont think you have written like this before but you did a great job..it was full of great description! good job Aunty! I love you and miss you!


  • November 7, 2006
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    terrific

    I love the flow of this poem very much dear Barb. It is quite a lovely poem of erotica. You have used all the senses and your imagination just flows from your pen lovely, giving the reader a vivid image of antiscipation. God Bless you always--


  • Lilredlll
    November 4, 2006
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    The image you leave is tantalizing to say the least. Your pic you paint helps one view it from a third person standpoint...Very good.

    Linda


  • XxMissundastoodxX
    November 4, 2006
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    Wow Libra! This was a different style from you! It's good to experiment with new ideas, and it has paid off for you! I am envisioning a man stepping into some kind of upper-class 'parlour' (if there is such a thing) Great imagery you have used here...

    Mareta