Oil-slicked and jasmine scented
the lusty hide of passion taunts;
masked and bound in writhing heat
this prey feels the predator's desire.
Circling and taunting admiring the view
of naked flesh quivering in anticipation
a hungry beast caresses it's captive
kindling a fire of consuming need.
A hand grasps a textured torture
singing vibrato in a slick cavern
riping moans from the hostage's throat
as another palm punishes a plump bottom.
Hardened nipples tormented by thick lips
taking breath from the lungs of the pleasured;
detached they wander, south-ward bound,
to drink of the fountain of life greedily
as shock-waves roar through the valley.
Straps grip the hips of a master's carnality
as shapely legs spread ever wider
and a rough entry is met with cries of approval;
a slow and steady rhythm of sensuality
soon gives way to an animalistic nature
as the fervor grows to unbearable heights
and orgasms reverberate to the core of voracity.
Author notes
TwistedBloodyLilly
Written November 4th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Girls, Girls, Girls...... Erotica Contest by Alpha-Q.
1750 points, ended September 5, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Options Beside HLA! by lesbian-in-love.
475 points, ended October 2, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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First I must say Love the pic. Now that is hot. I love the way this one flows. I lvoe the lines Circling and taunting admiring the view of nakes flesh quivering in anticipation kindling a fire of consuming need. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for entering and good luck
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I am moving this to the finals just because it has a strapon in it. I'm like that...
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I liked the metaphors and imagery.
Good luck and thanks for entering!
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this was wonderful again..beautiful...really sensual...it makes the whole act so uplifting..keep writing so that i may keep reading and enjoying myself..
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Well, I'm glad you're enjoying yourself so thoroughly. 
Thanks for the compliments. Lady Lilly
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I don't follow this one. A girl on girl picture but mentions of a master's fantasies............ which sort of (o
session is this?
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LOL
What you don't think a woman can be a master? Never heard of a dominatrix?
It's a lesbian piece, definately. Note the line (Straps grip the hips of a master's carnality) the straps hint at a strap-on; ergo, a lesbian. *
* Hope this clears it up. Catch ya later. Lady Lilly P.S. Please don't misconstrue any of my comments, I mean them all in good spirit and a joking manner. (Including that)
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nice nice
Very well written I must say. I like this write alot.
"as the fervor grows to unbearable heights
and orgasms reverberate to the core of voracity"
My favorite part. -
tanx 4 enterin
this is great!!!! ull b imformed if u won!!!!
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Magnificent
Your words blow me away. This was beautiful and so sensual, but not to the point that it's disgusting. You beautifully set the mood in your first two lines. Your lines nine through twelve had to have been my favorite. Then following it up with the "hardened nipples.." line was a perfect touch. I wish you the best of luck in the contests you have entered, TwistedBloodyLilly. Keep up the beautiful work.
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WOW
take me away with your words to the height of my awareness.
A hand grasps a textured torture
singing vibrato in a slick cavern
riping moans from the hostage's throat
as another palm punishes a plump bottom.
Hardened nipples tormented by thick lips
taking breath from the lungs of the pleasured;
detached they wander, south-ward bound,
to drink of the fountain of life greedily
as shock-waves roar through the valley.
what a great addition to my contest. thank you for entering and i wish you good luck
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girl on girl... i cant wait!
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thank you!
Well thank you darling! I'm glad my lesbian musings have met with your. . .um. . .satisfaction.
Thank you for your wonderful comment. Best Wishes, Lady Lilly
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A FINE PIECE, INDEED!
A very fine piece of lesbain poetry, indeed! This horny fellow loved the photgraph, too - of two beautiful woman in love who sadly had no need for a fellow like me! Still, I enjoyed watching and loved the beautiful, sweet, and sensual picture that upu painted. GOOD LUCK in the contest with this beautiful entry for nothing is more beautiful for me to see than two beautiful women who know how to satisfy one another.
Peace & Love!
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Nice Ms. Lilly I was wondering when you was gonna come down with some more poetry (erotica). Your to the teeth with description. I cant give a fav line for it all flowed well together. Bam, nicely done. Keep it up.
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Thank you! Your beautiful comments have made my day. As thanks to you for commenting on my poem feel free to send me a link to one of your poems and I will comment. Thank you again, ~Lilly~
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This is a reallty good erotic poem, it takes the reader with it and you can feel the passions rising right through to the climax. Your wording is perfect and leaves very little to the imagination. Good luck in the contest....Sue
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