close your eyes
press your body against the window to my heart
press your cheek against the glass
run your fingers over the lockand listen...
until you hear me
can you hear me?
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not just when it's easy
Written November 4th, 2006
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That was really awesome. I enjoyed it reading it.
Stacey
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Hummm........I liked the rythem of the poem!creativity is great ! keep it up!
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I don't usually go for short poetry, but this is beautiful. Good job! I'll even give you an applause!
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short and effective and genuine.
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"run your fingers over the lock". I know I probly always say this but you're writes never cease to amaze me. i wait in anticipation for your next one.
Sara -
This captures a lot for me. I'm not the best listener in the world, but I try to at least be a caring, if not good one. But basically doing what you have described here, I have heard some pretty heart-wrenching stories; stories that I wish I never had to hear. But I wouldn't trade it for the world, because helping someone else share a burden makes it worthwhile. Anyway, man, this is great work; I love your stuff. Keep it up!
JWM
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