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Mother Dearest

 

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A Mother
  A Friend
    A Nan

Your everything wrapped in one.

Mum

When I had fallen,
You were there to pick me up.

When I was sad,
You were there to cheer me up.

When I was happy,
You were there to laugh it up.

Mum

In time
Harsh words have been spoken.
Wounded
and
Scarred
But
Our heart's string never broken.

All that we are, is with in our eyes,
You always told me truth, never no lies.

No words
No flowers
Could match what you are.

To me
Your an angel
Sent from heaven to be my bright star.

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Written November 4th, 2006

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  • honey bear
    March 13, 2007

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    thank yo ufor entering and good luck in the contest with this lovely write ( i also loved the use of the british term *nan* )


  • x Bright Eyes x
    March 12, 2007

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    loved the pic it acoppained this very nicely indeed thank you for entering and i wish you best of luck in my contest


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 19, 2007

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    lyrebird74

    A poem I would write to my Mother as well
    Truly beautiful ... A perfect poem to a Mother

    Wonderful

    Thank you for your entry and best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Amanda


  • Asylaarix
    December 3, 2006
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    Thank you so much for sharing your emotions about your mother ... I am very fond of my mother and adore her much ... there for you have made me smile and I can really relate to you with this ... deep emotions, and great imagery of your mother ... good job sweety ... and good luck in the contest!