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Angel Aid(Tanka)

God made the angels
To respond to human strife
He gave them wings to fly
To anywhere there was need
Their love to quickly apply

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Written May 4th, 2003

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  • angelica silver member
    December 13, 2003
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    Same goes for here Bill.I printed all the poms off and read them several times.regards Angelica
    Please forgive me for not commenting before this,I had 61 poems to get through.


  • Lurie
    May 4, 2003
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    A prayer on wings
    carried from our lips to God's ears
    Gaurdians of light
    and love
    Angels...............Laura

    Beautiful write Bill!


  • Sherry gold member
    May 4, 2003
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    Gramps will you be my gramps angel and fly to me give me a hug? This is a sweet write xxx
    Love,Sherry
    Edited on May 04, 8:34 p.m. because ''.

  • reiayni
    May 4, 2003
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    apply is not spelled correctly you might want to fix it. Overall this was a very nice piece, continue the good work.


  • Skittlesmcafe
    May 4, 2003
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    aw
    that
    is
    so
    cute
    what
    more
    can
    i
    say
    all
    i
    love
    and
    hope
    for
    and have
    faith in
    is angels
    they are all hope
    and all everything
    thanks for the great poem,

    love and smiles always,
    mia

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