Girls night out
We went to see the hunks who dance each night
the girls all gather round to watch them prance.
‘I like the first I think I stand a chance,'
Sue drools with lust while gazing with delight.
And Sally whose normally quiet begins to stare
at number four and likes the way he looks.
‘So handsome looking at least in my books
so girls if you thinking of taking him-beware!’
My pick is number six I said with glee
he looks all right from where I’m standing here,
I think I’ll ask him can we have a beer?
And bring along his mates for you and me.
We yelled and screamed while they danced round
and oggled them as they began to strip.
In their jocks is where they held their tips
the more they danced, their cash fell on the ground.
The ladies mingled when the show was done
the three we fancied came across real fast!
We laughed and flirted until the night was past;
if you haven’t been you're missing all the fun.
I recommend you have a girls night out
you won’t regret the laughs you have that night.
Some climb the tables swaying left and right,
they clap their hands! That’s what it’s all about!
Author notes
We had a girls night out last night,I must admit I was on the table, you get a better view.
Some of it's true.....but not all!
Written November 3rd, 2006
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AHHHH But Chris, we did have such fun watching them dance and flex their muscles! Anyway if you read what Joan got up to 20 years ago, she was WORSE than me! At least I didn't yell GET EM OFF! GET EM OFF! HAHAHAHAHA
Jen.
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If you saw me without clothes you may sorely be tempted to call the cruelty man (winks). Jenelda you naughty girl, you ladies are by far more devilishly wicked in this area of life than we men? Sounds like one heck of a night, one that any man would love to be centre of attention in? (naughty winks)
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jenelda~
Hey! I thought that this was a really good poem. It was nicely written. I like the idea sound like some girls had some fun. Keep on writing and I hope to read more of your soon.
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Thanks pauline for your great comment, come down to Melbourne and I'll take you to one.
Love Jen.
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dear Ron, It was a fun night and good to let ones hair down occasionally. well, I'm pleased they didn't turn you on.
thank you for your beaut comment.
Jen
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Dear Hugh, Yep Joan often tells that story about that night. Can you ever imagine AJ standing on the table yelling that out? The mind boggles, but Shaz assures me it's true coz she was there. I must admit when I got up there last Friday night it was fun.
Lovesya
Jen
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Although the subject matter didn't turn me on The poem itslelf was written supurbly, nice flow & rhyme, Rythem was there as well. Humor kept me readin & did enjoy the poem . Thanx
~Ron~
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delightfully light here ay
this is so funny a little crazy is the right stuff and stuff it hon you have just gotta lu them ay hon thanks for this girls nite out enjoy it so very very much hon
super super men here
Love*Light*Peace
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Dear Jen,
So this is where you got your training? From Angelica's comment
one would think, if one didn't know her better, that she and her friends are just a lot of D O W's!
I'm glad you took this picture before they "got it all off" and exhibited a row of swinging danglers doing a Mexican wave!!!
Me and me mates prefer an artistic strip club any night.
Great poem, love!
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Gosh Jen, I can also remember going to one of those Girls night out about twenty years ago, my youngest daughter Julie couldn't go as her fiancee wouldn't let her. I said to her "What harm can you get up to with your Mother?" Boy, even my eldest daughter Sharon was looking on with a stern look on her face as her Mum and mums friend stood on the table yelling "GET EM OFF, GET EM OFF! and I was sober too coz I can't drink. But what fun we had.
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HAHA Jen, where was Peter? Was he at a boys night out? I went to one of these years ago and I had a ball.
Love Hine
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