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Broken

Tears leaking
Onto my pillow
From the windows-
To my brusised and battered soul.
Blood leaking
Onto my sheets
From the passage-
To my bruised and battered heart.
Battered and bruised
Brusised and battered
Broken Inside

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Written November 3rd, 2006

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  • Angel-Amethyst
    November 18, 2006
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    This is a good write Trog. Sad, but well written.

    Love ya lots, Teegs.

  • the oleander
    November 3, 2006
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    wow, deep, and dark. i realy like it, its short and sweet.and i think that you sould keep doing what you are and be sure to keep writing for you are realy good at it well i hope you keep in touch, ~*Heather