If you cared
you wouldnt do this.
If you loved me
youd call back to
work things out.
But apparently you'd
rather play your stupid
video game.
I'll admit it.
I'm hurt.
You get so pissed
then hang up on me
expecting me to be ok.
But im not.
You hang up on me
leaving me to wonder
what i did wrong.
I'm gonna tell you the
truth:
I'm hurt.
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Written November 3rd, 2006
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This is really good. I've had a recent expirience. Just yesterday I found out that the guy I like has a girlfriend. great job and keep up the nice work!
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im so sorry,
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yes i hate little fights! but everything is ok now so thats good. aw im glad u found sum1 better!
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awwwwwwww dont u hate lil fights? they hurt tho...well me & kyle... we broke up 2 months ago? & well i was right when i said i could never love some one like him...I LOVE SOME ONE BETTER!!!!! ill put up a link to a pic on my ap of me & my new love!!!!!!
xox
ceci -
thanks for the comments. everything is perfectly fine now. hes a good guy. so its all ok. i hope things r ok with u and ur bf. thanks again!
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aw thank u so much for the comments! everything is fine now. thanks again!
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thanks for the comments. ya ur right. infact everything is fine between me and him now. thanks again!
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that's really good..i feel the same way...i'm going through the same thing right now but we'll both get over it....eventually
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a sad poem and i can relate. i hate it when my boyfriend does that. if he treats you like that then he don't deserve you. find someone new that would.
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Oh, stiff upper lip! This was a sad poem, but the emotions were very well conveyed. I especially liked the repetition of "I'm hurt", although it makes me sad to know that your feelings were hurt in order to have written this. Keep writing.
Adding your comment:
thats a really great poem!
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