Where there were once tears of sorrow,
They are no more,
Body and soul, I seek potency within.
Shrouded in darkness, I now find the light,
I must be vigilant as there is always darkness that lingers.
I take a walk down the corridors of time,
Over look what has been, what is now, and what will come to pass,
I must not be afraid,
Where there is fear,
Comfort will come,
Patience is the key.
My body is broken,
Heart bleeds from pain,
My eyes see no more deceit to this world.
I cower no more
I close my eyes,
Release all sorrows inside,
I worry not for I know my heart shall heal in time.
I have self-confidence.
There is a light within,
Seek it beyond my darkness,
If found, I must walk to it,
For there lies a door beyond.
If I believe once more,
The door will open,
I wish to find redemption.
Forgiveness and help will come to me if only I ask.
Behind the door lies a pool,
If I trust than will I bathe in its waters.
I leave behind all misfortunes,
I shall be reborn.
Breathe again,
All is forgiven,
I appreciate this second chance.
Time is what I have.
Have faith,
I know I am loved,
I am free,
This is me,
This is the story of my rebirth.
~By Deaths Maiden~ (Copyright©2006)
Author notes
This was a vison or semi-dream stage I fell into during a Rekei session.
We were walked through a path of letting go of everything and to be reborn, basically.
I wanted to recount my vision I had because it was the most rewarding such an overwhelming experience and after that it helped me to live again, and I thank my Rekei Mistress each and every day and my Angels for watching over me.
I hope you enjoyed reading it as I have experiencing and enjoying my second chance at life.
Blessings to you all and Love and light to you.
Please give honest opinions (exempting negativity)
Written November 4th, 2006
A contest entry
- SPIRITUAL POETS by Pisces rainbow.
1050 points, ended May 18, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Truly Inspiring!
I am always fascinated to to witness someone who picks them off the ground after all thought to be broken, and then rise again. The will, determination and strength expressed in this poem, pulses blood through my veins...
Thank you for sharing this incredible piece for all of us to read.
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EVER SO BEAUTIFUL AND INSPIRING!!!!
When one sees the light of beauty and wakening of the heart and mind they come to know they are special and are loved and always have been.
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very beautiful journey
wonderful peaceful vision
I truely enjoyed.
thank you for entering my contest.
God bless...
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Very inspirational! It's simple and beautiful. Thank you for entering, and best wishes.
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beautiful, elaborate, wonderfully crafted. I see a little bit of philosophy in there, alright, good luck in the contest!
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a truly beautiful and very moving poem where you share your quest with us in a sensitive way ... the rich imagery and metaphors invite to walk the path with you and to meet you in the depth of your being ... thank you so much for this intimate testimony of life ...
maa
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Nice job! Good luck in the contest.
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Wasn't sure which side of this battle you were on, as it would go from a broken body to a victory of sorts. You created a strong sense of reality to this, as if it were a struggle you bled and pushed yourself through. that was good: Dave
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I really thought this was nice. A rebirth with so much detail. It was well written, and flowed easily, in my opinion. I wish you the best of luck.
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Wow, this is indeed quite inspirational. Your life obviously hasn't been easy, so I admire you for your strength to move on. Thank you for entering and good luck. xoxo
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Very well done so full of hope and strength. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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I see hope and inspiration in your words. Your rebirth into faith and trust. Well written. Thanks and good luck.
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This is a really well written peice, I loved reading it, yes rebirth and second chances to finding yourself once again is definatley an amazing thing.
I loved the message of this poem and how you kept it strong. Good luck in my contest, well done. -
this is so true
rebirth is beautiful
the peace and love you find is amazing
great work
loved this poerm
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Christian? It sounds like a christian poem, nothing wrong with that at least that way u have faith ina higher power... this was very good though. I hope faith finds you well. I know if u continue to excercise faith is one thing then it will come to you in time. Maybe not quickly but sooner rather than later. GL
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Wow!
This is well written indeed! Where di you get the idea for this poem from? It's very well written! Your a great great poet! Wish I could write poems like you! Well keep up the good work. Take care bibi!
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I like this piece, pain and sorrow does happen it life, but we all need to learn to move on, we all make mistakes and we all get hurt, its a part of life, but if we can learn something from it, we will be better as people. very well writen, i enjoyed this piece!
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This is such a very inspiring and painfully penned piece. There is such a saddness... Yet with each line I can see it being swallowed by hope; a rebirth. Tomorrow is always a new day. A clean slate. Another chance. Beautifully written piece!
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brilliantly written
i came to this via your contest - the whole piece feels like it is moving through water .... beautiful
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