Don't mess her around
You fucking twat
Leave her alone
And that is that
She is my best friend
And you are her lover
Or Ill hurt you so bad
It wont be a bother
You nuisance, you wanker
Don't touch my bird
You just fuck off
Go on you heard
Flirting and groping
Sly little jaunt
Thought it'd be secret
Ill tell her, you wont
Ill tell her, you destroyer
You wrecker of souls
All sweet and innocent
Another of your roles
So don't you dare,
Just take a step back or two
If you fuck her around
There wont be much left of you
So don't you dare
Hurt my little bird
Or ill be after your blood
Mark my word
Author notes
written about one of my very good friends, my little bird
Written November 3rd, 2006
A contest entry
- a by deleteit.
425 points, ended November 14, 2006, 10 entries
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Very dark and aggressive
Good luck in the contest
Ryan -
Very aggressive and I am loving it!!! Betrayers be warned by all means!!! This Tigress came out in protective form and anyone would be crazy to cross that line! Thank you for entering and good luck
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just enough to get your point across i'd say! very aggressive... but i don't think he'd want to mess w/ u.!!!
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im sorry, im not quite sure what you mean, thankyou for your kind words though. XxX
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Wow that is an aggressive tone woven all through that piece in one way i support it yeah yet in others i dont think that sort of behaviour is warranted. This is really well writen though and actually quite easy to read.
Timmy S. Edgar © 2006
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