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Footsteps in the Dark

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Walking alone in the dark

I hear footsteps behind me

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My pace increases

My heart races through night

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Running alone in the dark

I glance behind me

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I see no one

Only the blackness of night

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Certain I am not alone in the dark

I turn to face behind me

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Fear! Anger! Hate!

I scream into the night

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Silence alone in the dark

My heart beats inside me

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I feel my life leaving

My breath escapes into the night

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Found alone in the dark

Police walk around me

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No blood is near me

Rain pours through the night

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Confusion abounds in the dark

Footsteps are heard going away

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Police scurry to chase

But see no one in the dark

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Author notes

In keeping with the season
Written November 3rd, 2006

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  • FaeryPixieFey
    November 3, 2006
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    Oh this was such eerie fun. I enjoyed it immensely!!

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    Hehe!! Frolicing fun to read.

    Smoosh...Flit...Flutter...and Whoosh away...FaeryPixieFey.


  • Lyre-Bird-
    November 3, 2006
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    WOW!!!! The clip clap echos through my head, Gives a really eerie feeling, You have written this well. The clip clap, throughout, makes this a thriller
    Well written
    Tracey