You're eyes, breaking through the darkness
And smile, too wide to be of pure intent
The bond we share is special, I assure you
But this love is getting too deep
I want to feel you, it's like an addiction
But you no longer want to feed my hunger
I can tell, you feel my longing
And I can tell you see my attraction
You have my prohibited my love
For that I long for affection
Hanging on the words you spoke yesterday
No touch, no kiss, no feeling at all
Just an empty bed and a heart of black
Forbid me from your sight
Break apart my being
My soul is yours, I'm telling you
So take me lower, forbid my hunger and feed my pain
Those stars, no longer shining bright enough to guide me
Forsaken, forgotten, broken, and hurt
Without you're taste, there is no point in living
So, with that, I say goodbye to you
Author notes
<333 inspired by an episode of CSI, where a girl admits to being a sex addict. 
forsaken, stars, broken, pain, eyes, bright, smile
Written November 3rd, 2006
A contest entry
- Forbidden Love by Suberu14.
300 points, ended December 7, 2006, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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thank you &nd i really like your contest ♥ good luck with the judging
Edited on Nov 06, 9:22 because 'i messed up on a smiley'. -
You took the contest idea and made it your own - very interesting. I like the way you used the words and it was a perfect length - didn't bore me or anything. Good poem and thank you for entering in my contest.
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Holy shit girl this is deep. that must be some Inspiration. I like this a lot. Hehe be kind it kind of sounds like me. But I’m only addicted to my bf. well done. oh I forgot good luck in the contest. even though I know your going to win and you don't need it.
~Serenity~
Edited on Nov 03, 11:02 because 'forgot to add something'.
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