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Poetic Trace

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Within deep inside of me lives intensely and escapes in dreams
Tasting the buds of fantasy and desire among my dreams of
Sunshine and apple blossoms sprinkle down so pure
While lying in the grasses of meadows made from love.

The wildflowers sway with the winds pretense of movement
Like a symphony played on an alabaster key of “D”
Angels prick each string inside the piano’s resonating hub
Calling doves to pair seeking music for their dance’s odyssey.

The walls of earth speak the poetic trace that runs through it
Twisting so slightly to round off in the corners with a bow
Golden leaf mimics the life that indulges in every vice
Courtyard fountains run freely within their own ebb and flow.

The fragrant swells of floras are so in bounty it could rain
Sweeping my body as I lay here among them all in peace
A flower girl in the real sense of the word, but not in meaning
Wrapped in natures most beautiful and fragrant pelisse.

Melodies comfort my slight hesitation to just let go of myself
Make snow angels out of springs fresh growing lives
All holds hand with God and live in His righteous light
I collect the petals to make cachets for my dresser drawers.

Butterflies with such creative designs on their wings flutter by
Like natures fashion statement and show they are giving
I laugh a little when one lands on my finger I extended out
It lets me touch its wings before flying away and continuing.

Relaxation couldn’t be more pure than this right now
Enveloping me within its own fabric in earth’s secret crease
So beautiful to be a privy to this great wonder of the world
Lying within its own kind of life accepting mine with peace.

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Written November 3rd, 2006

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  • Jackle silver member
    June 6

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    I 'm so glad to see it

    Sounds just like her. We read each others poems and shared so much...Then she was gone. Something was missing from AP. Then today 6 6 09,
    I went back to my favorites and started to just deleat her. Then I thought I'd try again and maybe she would be back. I found this. She was a good friend. This was written in 2006...but if ever she returns, I pray she will let me know. (=
    Jackle (Jackie Knode)





























  • Malabu
    December 30, 2006
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    One day we too will dance in the wild flowers, Molly

    It is with sorrows heart the thoughts flow through me
    yet memories of you will linger in the hearts of us all. Sing praise to our sweet Jesus girl. God loves poetry too....
    Rest in peace Molly
    and sing to us all from Heaven.
    These are the last applause I can give to you
    With Love
    Malabu


  • Ethereal One gold member
    November 12, 2006
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    excellent presentation

    Dearest Molly, You are remembered with love. You had such a talent for writing of the beauty of nature, peace, and happiness. I trust in my heart that you have found happiness and peace, that really doesn't exist on this earth. I look forward to you greeting me when it is my time. Love you Molly.

    "So beautiful to be a privy to this great wonder of the world
    Lying within its own kind of life accepting mine with peace."

    Ethereal Melody



  • crivanea silver member
    November 11, 2006
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    one of ur many amazing poems..ur poetry has always astound me..thnx u very much..and rest in peace- we'll miss you on AP

  • ocerus
    November 9, 2006
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    I don't know the identity of the person who decided to feature this, but as one of Molly's many friends I want to sincerely thank you. She was special wasn't she? Thank you so much! - ocerus

  • ChillyGeorgiaPeach
    November 8, 2006
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    Relaxation couldn’t be more pure than this right now
    Enveloping me within its own fabric in earth’s secret crease
    So beautiful to be a privy to this great wonder of the world


    Such an interesting write. Keep up the good work!


  • guardian angel 1416
    November 8, 2006
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    Molly was my dear friend and i will always carry the spirit of her poetry in my heart and mind as i sense her spirit around me in her new role as a guardian angel......
    i can see the smile on her face and the peace in her eyes as she comforts herself in the place she has longed for all her life. I am so glad to know the her spirit is one that is contented, and happy. Molly deserved to be happy and most certainly is now! Visit us my friend, let us know your presence, as it will be welcomed with open arms. GOD bless Molly Densmore.........forevermore!


  • suseann
    November 8, 2006
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  • wbiro gold member
    November 7, 2006
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    "So beautiful to be a privy to this great wonder of the world
    Lying within its own kind of life accepting mine with peace."

    Her last written words...


  • November 7, 2006
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    A fitting expose' of your work. You have gone home...


  • angelica silver member
    November 7, 2006
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    Dear Molly, I don't know you personally, but I've seen you around AP and read some of your poems. I hope your spirit is at rest now. It's so sad when one of our Poets leaves us to go home, remember to drop in to the "Poets Heavenly Cafe" that I've created for past poets to meet and write their beautiful poems because life doesn't end here, you've just begun another journey. My condolences to your family.

    Joan benecke


  • AngelicMistress gold member
    November 7, 2006
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    REST IN PEACE, MOLLY

    Dearest Molly:

    All I can say is that this is an absolutely beautiful piece you have shared with us here.....

    Be blessed with love and light, and also rest in peace dear sweet precious poetess.....


    A standing ovation.....

    AngelicMistress

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