You stepped out of Destiny's
mist
and directly into my vision.
Trees quivered with Hope~
Your fingers touched
my face with poise.
Past's painful recognitions
released; rapture ensued.
Within, the eternal murmur
of the Soul~
Torrents' turmoil had me
violently floundering
above the water's deeper calm.
Now I stand on the shores
of circumstance.
You embraced me freely
and with Love~
Dreams now come true
with ghostly clarity
and
shafts of light land
on the path at my feet
in a radiance of Truth~
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Written November 2nd, 2006
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I have never read your words before but they are just beautifull.
I know of this person you write of and she is a Great woman
I Pray you are both blessed
Rick -
You stepped out of Destiny's
mist
and directly into my vision.
what a beautiful beginning to a story that I hope has no end
And how wonderful it must be to fall for another poet/poetess.Understanding of each other should come so much easier. Heck, I married someone who definitely is not a poet
but we did not even speak the same language. I had just learned proper "Queen's English" and he is a Yank 
. Best wishes to both of you,this write has me swooning
z
reenie
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Thank you so much for the encouraging comment and applaud. I thank you again. ~Mark
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What can I say that hasn't been said?
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I'm sorry you were betrayed. Sometimes love does end in tears. Thanks for the encouraging comment on the poem. ~Mark
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you guys are in love how sweet. i loved an ap sister... and in the end which came sooner than i could have imagined, she betrayed me.. i wish the best of luck and then some with you two.. love eachother deserve eachother, be truthful. great poem
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