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A Dog's Life



Leading a dog's life
How wonderful it would be.
Not a care in the world,
Come and go as you please.

Some body to feed you
and scratch behind the ears.
A dog's life indeed,
Shall be for me.

A game of fetch we'll play
Maybe tug-o-war as well,
With a pat on the head,
and a biscuit to chew.

Time for a nap,
Beneath master's feet.
A dog's life indeed
That's the life for me.


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Written November 2nd, 2006

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  • 3 Scratches behind the ears

    Fun and simple without being simplistic this credible choice contribution to canine contentment can completely conquer, charm

    well deserving 3 Scratches behind the ears


  • Raven Tears gold member
    July 23

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    What a cute little write, it sounds like a beautiful life for a dog.
    Thankyou for enetering, goodluck.


  • Candy6
    June 19
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    cute


    • sunshinegirl
      June 19
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      Thanks Candy. My hubby started this one, and I finished it he got stuck.

  • Paladin Warrior
    November 2, 2006
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    A dogs life indeed, i think everyone want the simple life, again what talent, thank girl joe

  • Maddogk
    November 2, 2006
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    Would be great to have a dogs life, no worries at all...
    Nicely written Nyetta.
    LOVE IT

    Jeffro
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