Tearing bits of flesh from my soul,
Give me life from your kiss as the blood flows from an agonized death.
This eternal love, burning passion rolling from your lips
Bringing the embodied essence to torture.
Heaven’s on fire through your eyes, through your kiss,
Oh my love, watch the sun burn so we may live forever!
Along with the capital of course,
The anticipation of it all
Lost forever in the wounded embrace.
Let the pain end tonight, I can’t say it enough, till the end of eternity.
Let it end tonight.
you can never resists
a vampire's kiss.
Author notes
Written November 2nd, 2006
A contest entry
- The Strength to Carry You - An Options Contest by Celticjedi.
400 points, ended November 6, 2006, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Picture contest lots of options by Mingan Tzar Avarus.
425 points, ended April 17, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you for your entry and good luck in my contest.
~Corey~ -
this is for option 6 lovely ^_^
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Amazing! This sounds like you have experience lol! Anyway, very nicely worded and great on the imagery, totally cool. I love vampires a lot, and to fantasize a vampire kiss is an interesting way to kill time doncha think?lol. Great job! Thanks a lot for entering and may the Goddess be with you!
Love you
Cj
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