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The Lazy Day's

Lost in a daze
              as you sail across
                                 the open water.

Free as the wind
                it's a feeling of
                                  no other.


Untamed and true
                to it's form,
                              it takes you on a
                                                journey
                                                        into the unknown.

Author notes

My dad and I made  a Clipper (a hudge sail boat for who don't know what it is) on Frame made out of string as a retirement present for My family doctor and good friend Dr.C. Gosling. We named it The Lazy Day's. all at once out of nowhere that quote up above hit me. So I dedicate that to him from my heart to his. He has a passion for sailing and he will be missed dearly when he retires.
Written November 2nd, 2006

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  • katina
    March 18, 2007

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    Beautifully Penned!


    An extraordinary poem so full of images, flow, and beauty.

    Great Job, and a wonderful purpose for writing it~!