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I swear to god that i love you

I swear to god that i love you
And if you didn't love me i don't know what i would do
I wish i could be with you everyday
But there doesn't seem to be any way

There's been alot of times that we've
Some moments happy, others were sad

Like all the times we ate fast food
And the couple times that you even called me "dude"

But then there were times when i pissed you off
And then all our talking was completely cutoff

I still regret those bad timees to this very day
And i always will, even when those days are far away

There really isn't much i can say
Even though it is your birthday
All i hope is that you'll always be mine
Even through the days that are a long way away

Author notes

Umm yea its my g-friends b-day so i wrote a poem........tell me wat you think before i give it to her ill take any suggestions
Written November 2nd, 2006

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  • November 2, 2006
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    AWE

    awe i really like this make sure u capitalize ur I's awe i really wish my bf would of wrote me this

    -Dawn-


  • Glamorous
    November 2, 2006
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    Aww, lol it's sort of cheesy...but that's not a bad thing because it's a cute kind of cheesy. I'm sure she'll love it.