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Tim

A German hunk
I’d like a chunk

A smile from him
That hunk named Tim

I could go for miles
On just one of those smiles

He is so hot
I like him a lot

He’s tall and dreamy
And oh so steamy

Why won’t he look my way
It’s almost as if to say

I am too good for you
And I am so afraid it’s true

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Written September 16th, 2006

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  • kittkat2007
    November 9, 2006
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    Thanx It was a "spur of the moment" thing


  • AmazinJason
    November 9, 2006
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    This made me laugh, it's really cute