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Able Body

Energized and ready
For the day to capture,
But no one with me.
I feel so lost and lonely,
Desperate for a soul to hold me
Someone to want this misplaced body.

Holding my head up,
Keeping my eyes low
Watching the ground
Where my hopes are trampled on.
Energized and still ready,
For the day to capture
This meadow filled of ghosts.

Pleading and crying,
Craving someone to hold me
Desires for an able body
To understand me completely.
Energized and ready,
For the day to capture
One of those able bodies.

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Written November 2nd, 2006

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  • Fate
    November 6, 2006
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    I enjoyed the quiet yet steady optimism of this piece.


  • Lady Eventide
    November 3, 2006
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    Great work. I think that your background choosing was really great with this one. Wanting someone will make you think that you are constantly climbing up and down stairs...stairs that look like they have no end.