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forever and ever

"forever and ever"-him
"forever and always"-me
"i swear"-him
i trust him, i must trust him
but i'm afraid i won't escape pain
i'm afraid it is hunting me
and before too long it'll
catch me with my guard down
if it does, say good bye
for i shall never love again.

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yet again another one i wrote a while back and just found let me know what you think.
Written November 2nd, 2006

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  • Beautifully Poetic
    November 30, 2006

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    this is a poem everyone can relate to, well i definitely can and a lot of my friends do it, it's like you wanna trust them and your scared if you do itll only hurt because of whats happened in the past, and i think you have done a fabulous job describing that feeling here...you do have a way with words and i have not yet come to not like a poem that is written by you...SO GOOD WORK!!