Wild foamy waves crash
Roaring with ferocity
Against soft, smooth sand.
Author notes
Feel free to read and review.
Written November 2nd, 2006
A contest entry
- Nature Form Poetry Contest by Kari.
400 points, ended November 6, 2006, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Haiku is very much suited to this contest and you certainly have some wild foamy seas where you are from. well done all the best...
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This is a tender haiku and I can see it in my mind. Thank you for sharing and I'll comment more after the contest. Good luck.
Kari -
I like this Haiku. I have tried to write a few and they aren't easy, so I am no expert at reviewing them, but this one gives a wonderful vivid picture of the sea to me. you went from the ferocious side and ended on a very calming note. Lovely work and best to you in this contest
Welcome to the site to another fellow Aussie
Gaylene
Edited on Nov 02, 4:43 because 'extra comment'.
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