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Always Torn

I will always love
doing what I do
Overly emotional
Never thinking
Thinking too much
Kidding around
Not thinking again
Over examing everything
Worrying
Wondering
Having second thoughts
Alluring
Touching
Telling secrets
Over dramatic
Dealing with lies
Over my head
Piercing my heart
Losing myself
Easily
Assertive
Soul searching for
everything
Shrivelled up
angel
Very torn
Electric
music
Eternity

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Written November 1st, 2006

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  • Stripes
    October 15, 2007
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    wow this poem is really great and orginal the way it was written..


  • NeanderthalMan
    November 1, 2006
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    Good Job

    I read it fast, and it felt that way..aasily?? But it flowed right for what you are trying to say..very good keep it up..


  • grannyeri gold member
    November 1, 2006
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    Hard to change something one has always done - this looks like a long list of things you will always love. Brevity suits this.