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Control

Darkness is my company
Blindfolded where I cannot see

Feel the leather's simple brush
Then crackle as flesh starts to blush

To sing upon my skin, it's praise
As tiny welts begin to raise

Tingles travel down my spine
Ass in air, connects the line

Another hiss flies through the air
Suede fingers tease my bottom, bare

Quickened pace, now lashing out
Seven, eight, I hear you shout

In control, you now demand
On your knees is your command

To the floor, I fall with pride
Tween my lips, you roughly slide

I look up and smile in suspense
The pain, the pleasure, it's so immense

Push in deep as you explode
To take each drop as it flowed

Kissed the tip with my tongue
And whispered soft, can I now cum?

Author notes

Ok, so I got a wild hair up my ass tonigh and went a little playful.
Written November 1st, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 2, 2006
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    Thank you Keith. And one more, or many, won't hurt. Appreciate your words love.

    Storm

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 2, 2006
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    Thank you for the comment, much appreciated.

    Storm
  • Keith Drew gold member
    November 2, 2006
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    Fantastic!

    Exotic, sensual,the man to domineer the female,the primitive, the giving in. Oh wow can we go back to Neanderthal please!
    All this civilisation is so damn boring.
    Wonderful as usual my God the woman in you amazes me!
    Fantastic!
    Just gotta write me something like this. Hold on I think I did, oh well one more won't harm?
    Edited on Nov 02, 6:25 p.m. because ''.
  • Arzab
    November 2, 2006
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    Wow. Amazing write. The imagery in this piece is powerful and vivid. Very hot write. Keep up the great work.

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 2, 2006
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    Just one way I love to play, and oh I love to tease
    But I have become a perfectionist when my aim is to please

    Thanks for the comment
    Storm

  • plainoljoe
    November 2, 2006
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    Good lord woman, I love the way you like to play--hope you got yours too the satyr

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 2, 2006
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    Thank you for commenting, appreciate it.

    Storm

  • xXx W1ck3D xXx
    November 2, 2006
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    This was awesome. The imagery was amazing... not to mention extremely hot. Very very good write. Yummy.

    W1ck3d

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 2, 2006
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    Thanks for the comments, much appreciated.

    Storm

  • Blueskywonder
    November 2, 2006
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    Wow,what a wonderfull way to capture the moment it's a beautifull expression of giving yourself top someone well done goddess and thankyou for sharing.
    Edited on Nov 02 because ''.

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 1, 2006
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    Thanks for the comment, much appreciated.

    Storm

  • Tears of Roses
    November 1, 2006
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    Wonderful Write Sweet Friend!!!

    MMM I know that feeling wonderful job.
    Roses to you

    Teresa
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