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Soul's frozen in time

I whisper i love you
you tell me no more
i hold my hand to you
you push me to the floor

I want to ask one thing of you
Instead i let you walk away
I miss you already
My soul's gone astray.

I hear your call a mile away
You tell me you love me one last time
Our soul's frozen forever more
As your lips meet mine

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its shit i know, but i dunno what to think right now
Written November 1st, 2006

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  • dream5111
    January 28, 2007

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    "I whisper i love you
    you tell me no more
    i hold my hand to you
    you push me to the floor" is my favorite part great write


  • autumns ashes
    November 3, 2006
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    you don't deserve to have this happen to you sweetie. i love this poem, it may not be the most eloquent thing in the world, but the true pain and misery you feel is brilliant and clear. i love you sweetie, and this poem is amazing <3


  • queen Moderators member
    November 1, 2006
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    The first stanza spells it all out. Loving someone that don't want you back is one of the most painful things. You deserve every happiness life has to offer.