peacefalls to earth
as
my spirit
rises to heaven
I find calm
and myself
within rays of hope
falling for me,
for me
silence becomes
a physical experience
I know God is here
this beauty
is no coincidence
faith strengthened
blessings realized
my heart liftsa thankful prayer as
peace
falls
for
me
Author notes
Somehow I can always find God in nature...
Written November 1st, 2006
A contest entry
- A Spiritual Journey Or Nature’s Beauty Round 2 (INVITE ONLY) by meena krish.
300 points, ended November 8, 2006, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PIF with a TWIST!!! Season Of Change by Spiritual Nature.
800 points, ended November 5, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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You keep your words minimal and still they seem to say so much. A delicate elegance that not many can accomplish. Best wishes to you and keep that pen handy dear poet.
♥ Touchof1der -
I so agree, as you can tell from my penname. Lovely and spiritually lifting write. Thank you so much for sharing. Blessings, D.
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So strikingly beautiful this speaks volumes, yet softly, peacefully, of the rapture around us. Thank you for this awesome entry.
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I loved the last part how you made it fall and come together.Thank You for entering
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hmmm....
Somehow, I am finding god in this verse
Great penning, great work...the way peace falls and spirits go up, it can mean much to many people, different to many others...but really, an awesome writing! 
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God is always in nature for he created it. I see this won a silver trophy so congrats in the contest. I enjoyed reading it. It flowed so well. I felt at peace reading it.
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I love the image here, and I also really love the format of this poem. beautifully written and well-deserved of your trophey
great writ
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First of all congrats on winning the silver...
Beautifully presented Tam, I love your style of writing, and I especially like this one with woven words of your poetic charm...peacefulness washed over me as I read this delightful poem, it is spiritually uplifting with God in every word...thank you so much, you've written a marvellous piece
Love and smiles...
~Lilac :f
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Beautiful
There is such a sense of the spiritual in nature. Attending the sermon of a magenta sky, marked by the
choir of a whippoorwill, and a mockingbird. A lovely and soulful write.
xxoo
dk
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Hey....you stop that!!!
It isn't nice for the commentator to make a more lovely and poetic statement than the poem itself!!!! Didn't you receive your "NICE COMMENTING PRACTICES" brochure from AP??? lolol
I am very humbled by your kind words...thank you so much.
Your lovely comment has made my evening and I am grateful.
I feel very blessed by your presence within my humble attempts at prose.
Blessings! Tammy xoxo
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Delightful
God is in the architecture it has been said, and I agree. God is in the trees, rivers, buildings, people.
But nevermore so than in nature. "Faith strengthened
my heart lifts
a prayer as
Peace
falls
for
me"
This is my favorite part. You convey the beauty of nature subtly and then lean toward its Creator. Very nice work!
hugs Wolfie
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Moving
Lovely piece, Tam, as always! Your words flowed across the page. This piece reads with such ease, simply effortless. A very strong and meaningful write, my friend! Moving and heart touching.
~Lori
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Beautiful
What a beautifully injected spirtual poem in my opinion! Makes you think of the actually moment of fall...and the feeling that comes from it.
Lovely,
Cheers,
Khalid
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Sweet. You know you are one of my favorites. You write like a person who is blessed and appreciative.
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Beautiful
This is so very beautiful tam, very spiritual and calming. Loved the form and flow and your thoughts so captivating. Excellent piece and my pleasure to read. Bunny
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Thank you for sharing this wonderful work! I enjoyed it, it was very good. I like the hope in this poem. Keep up the great work!
~+*Annie*+~
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Lovely
So tranquil and peace-filled. A serenity pool of words. Enjoyed reading this soothing piece - speaks of a sweet soul. Thanks for including this in the reading list. Much peace and take care.
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Beautiful
Excellent penning and so very true. God can be found every where you look in nature! I mean in every leaf, flower, waterfall, etc... every critter... everywhere! This is just beautiful, serene and lovely all the way around! Bravo! I love it! Thanks for sharing and best wishes~
Frog
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Lovely
Hi Tammy. A lovely write and presentation. Serene and soothing to the spirit. Very good flow and tone. Lovely expression of emotion. Excellent word choice. Nice alliteration. In nature we see God's almighty hand at work and His peacefulness can be felt deeply. The silence of contemplation brings one closer to Him. Well crafted and a most enjoyable read. Shelley
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Beautiful write again Tam. Girl you are talented to the core! It was so relaxing as I read through it.I had to read it once more when I heard the rain falling down outside!! Yes its raining again,lol. GBY
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Yesterday i saw a view that was breath taking!
this poem discribes exactly how that felt, i can send the pictures to you and you'll see what i mean.....
Awesome write! -
Thank you very much for reading and commenting on my poem. I so appreciate you hosting the contest as well.
This was a wonderful write for me as I love uplifting spiritual poetry!
Blessings! Tammy -
Thank you Tim! I so appreciate your time and kind thoughts.
I love this kind of write...it is really who I am I guess.
You are very sweet indeed!
Blessings! Tammy -
Thank you again for entering my contest. This indeed
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Its easy to find God in nature because it is a prime example of His creation and you can find the true beauty of Him in it. Beautiful job, Tam.
God bless and thanks for sharing!
--Tim -
This is absolutely lovely! A very sweet, touching poem my friend!! GBY
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Yes, nature certainlay lets us know that there is a God who created all this and who still looks after it. It is just some humans who have used the environment for their own power and weath, and have made it an unhappy place to be at times. Sentiments well expressed in these lines.
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Serene and in love
Whoaaaa this is sooooooooo awesome. The Peace of God oufff something i feel a lot these days, Thanks Tam for your awesome poem, short and powerful!! Through the Holy Spirit, we become magnets of peace to the ever changing world!! This is a great poem!! Love and Blessings xx -
A creative write. A lovely inspirational write. Very good glow and tone. Deep expression of emotion. Your faith shines through in this piece. Beautiful word choice. A well crafted free verse and a much enjoyed read. Shelley
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very interesting. havent seen anything like this. truly enjoyed reading.
tranquility and serenity be yours. 
beautiful verses penned from a beautiful spirit. -
It is true..sometimes when I am so awed by nature's
beauty I feel God's presence and the peace that follows.
This is a calm and blissful write where peace just
falls upon the reader..lovely. Thank you for entering my
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wow i thought that this was awesome well done Tam i like your material.
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Thank you Kevin! I knew you would like this picture and I thought about you as I was writing this poem!!!
I so appreciate you reading and commenting on my poem this afternoon. How sweet are you?
Blessings! Tammy -
SO RELAXING AND SOOTHING
Such a relaxing and peaceful poem I feel so much more at ease having read your beautiful words.
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Tam, my love. How beautiful you are and how true are your words. I always feel closer to God in nature then any where else. It is so uninterupted by people and problems. It is peace for the soul, God's country.
Wonderfully said BEAUTIFUL SPIRIT OF GOD and NATURE!
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Very Good!
Yup! Not many places I see/feel the god stuff. Nature is probably the most significant. If ever there was a higher power .
A very lovely peaceful poem Tammy. I just love the fisrt stanza, the image of peace falling to earth; Beautiful!
And a wonderful image to go with the poem too
Best wishes in the contest
Sincerely -Emmjay -
Loife is loike a box of Choklits...
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Very Good
Very nice Tam, I just read a poem written for you, also well done.
Love the serinity of this work
I find calm
and myself
within rays of hope
falling for me,
for me
Silence becomes
a physical experience
I know God is here
Some wonderfull words, Rick -
awesome
You better believe you can find God in nature...from the rain that falls, to the soft breezes...that is so beautiful...smile..hugs and love, David -
Beautiful Cosmic Fabric:)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Very transcendental! Beauty as always flows endlessly from your pen, writ in purple ink! I like this alot.
very peacefull and tranquil, you can almost feel a breeze from the picture!
--Robert
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