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A Kiss In The Rain

Angered at the sound of it-hitting-splashing-shattering the silence


Kodak moments printed to remind you of the best days of your life
Insignificant reminders
So I silently sit-and I watch you undress-the darkness moves me
Soon I`m in front of you-the butterfly on your hand


Inch by inch-you shed your skin
Nauseated I flutter about-Up and Down the motion sooths me


Tourniquet-Heal me
Hypocrite-Judge me
Empathy-Follow me


Righteousness comes with a cost-Goddess satisfy me
Anger overwhelm me-Create me-Change me
Into something I cant understand and cannot for the life of me control
Nestled deep in a cocoon of sleep-I awake with a sense of immorality

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Written November 1st, 2006

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  • -Kayleigh-
    November 1, 2006
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    Really Good.

    This is really good hunn!!! I love how you said Kodak moments....it's great. This was very well worded and very creative. Keep up the good work hunn. Love you! ♥