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The Human Temple


They say the human body is a Temple
designed for others to admire,
some don't like the colour or the structure
others find some fill them with desire.

Together they would make a great Cathedral
which was probably the plan at the start,
but separately with misuse and neglect
most Temples are falling apart.

When it comes to maintaining the Temple
some  don't seem to know what to do,
the inside is protected by organs and cells
but the outside is just up to you.

The builder was more than a genius
he had more than one structure to give,
his creation was more than a miracle
for he built it and then made it live.

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Written November 1st, 2006

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    May 31, 2008

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    Just a wonderful piece you have presented bringing the scenario of this life through your amazing poetry..well done...


  • Melodies
    November 3, 2007

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    Quite inspiring, yes!

    Yes, I do find this poem to speak truly, for we should respect our bodies and the bodies of others. A fine poem.


  • WhollySurrendered
    February 22, 2007

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    this is an excellent concept. somewhat metaphorical so to speak. especially where you inderectly refer to racism. great write.


  • Sunshine Always
    November 12, 2006
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    Loud applause Norman, for this unique piece. The last four lines are wonderful. Take care...mal

  • serious clown gold member
    November 7, 2006
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    Thanks again Ang,thats a welcome comment for any poet to recieve, best wishes---Norman


  • -Ang-
    November 7, 2006
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    WOW!!!!!!!!!!!


  • UnderTheWeepingMoon
    November 2, 2006
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    this was simply beautiful! I loved it!

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