Deny me the things that spoil my soul
so that my spirit may be pure
There are so many that I dare not name them
for fear surrounds me
Open my eyes to the things I cannot see
So that your strength will guide my weakness
Though I'm not worthy of your love
I know you give it just the same
Your presence I feel inside and out,
So close but yet so far
Through trembling awe and humble heart
I must learn to listen though there is no sound
Deny me the things that spoil my soul
Release me from my pain
Immense force within my heart
That I cannot, will not ignore
Be this the only path for me to take for you
Then I must walk it gladly
Author notes
I cried during this so please don't be too harsh.
Written November 1st, 2006
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Wonderfull write,the more i read the more it grows on me.thankyou for sharing Apple.
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Wow
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Hope your well. This poem means a great deal to me and it makes me very happy to know it reaches others in the same way.
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Spot on my perceptive friend. You did a better job than me hey
And thank you.
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Wow, it had rhythm of its own, just seemed to read itself. Beautiful, remarkable, sounds as though it be a true psalm to God; whoever it speaks of I can see what it would mean for me. -
Wow,this is a wonderfull expression of devotion to another soul
who inspires you and they say you should follow your heart i really do love the imagery portrayed in this poem it feels so spiritual and deep.Well done you have finished your poem brilliantly thankyou for sharing i look forward to reading more. -
Ha Ha you almost sound surprised Thanks pnk I appreciate it lots.
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nice
amasing expression... i think it has a lot to do with how you see the world blinding with its ignorance to material things and you strive not to get caught too. and a little about searching for the one who has the amazing ablility to streangth you through this. actually relly good. -
Thank you, your very kind. I'm not sure if it's finished or not. I've come to a stop without feeling like it's done so I guess I'll just have to keep coming back to it.
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wow,this is great what a wonderfull meaningfull poem i really do like.Well done i love the imagery portrayed in this poem and thankyou for sharing.sos i have not any applause and think this truly deserves i cant wait untill it's finished.
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