This bottle wont satisfy my hunger
And your touch wont cure my pain
I keep falling under, falling under again
Everything I knew, Everything I am
Never was good enough
Never good enough for you
The bottles are running on empty
And your energy is running low
Tonight when we part
I know I'll remain alone
I keep falling under, falling under again
I can't keep up with the voices in my head
They scream your name and crave a taste
They remember that night, they remember the fight
I wont let go, not today
Everything I know, everything I want to be
Can't you see, you're going to be the death of me
Your eyes they linger, in the back of my mind
No matter how hard I try I still seem to be
Falling under, falling under again
And I can't help it, I can't save myself
Keep falling under, again and again
Author notes
For some reason I really like this poem, don't ask me why. hope you like it too 
Written November 1st, 2006
A contest entry
- Fallen {Picture inspired} by Lauren Noir.
400 points, ended November 11, 2006, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this is amazing, lyssa boo. i love you. <3
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This bottle wont satisfy my hunger
Such true words, very true words indeed
I loved this poem
You have good reason to be proud, the pain was brilliantly put in, the heartwrenching emotion was amazing
wWell done and good luck
Thanks for entering
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I love this poem. It sounds like my relationship with my husband/bf man this truly brought a tear to my eye even though it's probably not meant to but this hit home. I know why you like it so. well done. See I knew you could write beautiful work.
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