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The Love We Feel

As I sit here waiting for you
I ponder over the memories we'll make
The moments we'll share
The bond we'll secure

I can't stand the thought of not having you here
You are my drug
My addiction
One that I feel so entirely deprived of

You hold me together
Like the midnight blue of the night sky
Holds all the stars hovering above us
Like the love we feel for each other holds us together

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Written October 31st, 2006

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  • Again, it is a fine poem that touches upon those feelings that all people in love can understand. I certainly hope it all worked out for you.


  • angelsslayer
    February 7, 2007
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    Nice

    A sweet and deep poem. I liked the emotion, it was xpressed really well. Good rhyme as well.