Thoughts of you flit through my mind
Confusion fogs my senses
A tumult of emotions overcome me
A roaring sea I must somehow escape
I need to look inside myself
Search my heart and soul
But I'm terrified at what I'll find
Feelings that are still present
Things I've left unsaid
Inner secrets I keep denying
Love for someone I want to get over
Maybe I don't have to search so far
I may already know how I feel
But what happens next?
Where do I go from here?
I can't tell you my feelings again
You've given me too many chances
My excuses are spent
But I know deep inside
That still have feelings for you
Author notes
I wrote this in September towards the beginning of the school year about the same boy that would become my first boyfriend.
Written November 5th, 2006
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A poem full of emotions
This poem really pulls out all the emotions. It touched the depths of relationships in a great way. Very well done.
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YAH! Katlyn you got an account!!! I'm so happy I can't wait to read your stuff! And hey don't be sorry, I love hearing about you and Alex, I'm so excited for you guys and I want to hear everything that happens.^^
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awh...this is a good very poem...its so much better than mine...neways...yea i got an account...its katlyn...i'll post my poems later...when i find them...neways...i never saw alex...his mom didn't come home in time...so we're meeting on monday or tuesday...i'm excited...we're both starting to really like each other...i want to go to sleep but i won't be able to cuz i'll be thinking about him...sorry i keep going on about this...neways...i'll talk to youat school on monday luv ya
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thanks. heh heh as I've told you the bus ride was ermmmm very intense lol.
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Awh. :] I especially liked the lines "I can't tell you my feelings again / You've given me too many chances", they were very interesting and struck me as somehow different than ordinary...hm...
So, how was your play thing today?? Anything interesting happen there??
~ Lady ~
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