Yet My Heart
I’m not in love
I’m far too lost
Swimming in eyes
Swayed by a smile
Entitled to sulk
Acknowledging the emotion
Turned to dark
I’m an easy mark
A thing on clouds
I knew it wouldn’t come about
Just a fling just this thing
My heart sings aloud
A thing, happened to include you
Yet your heart loves not two
Yet my heart blames not you
Unconquered I walk home
I needed a touch, I felt sore
It was too much to be asking for
Don’t let me go, not in this rain
Not in this pain, please feel the same
At the risk of sounding cliché
My heart’s far from ok
I thought we were great
But that’s what they all say…
I’ve been trying, yet my heart
Keeps on breaking
I’ve been thinking, yet my heart
Beats a faking
From the point of knowing your name
From the start of feeling this shame
I’ve lost my words, I’ve lost my charm
I’m losing my mind, it cost me my hart
Author notes
Written October 31st, 2006
A contest entry
- Homos only!!!! by CapturedMoon.
350 points, ended November 4, 2006, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - heartbreak hotel ♥ by Captain Obvious.
375 points, ended April 30, 2007, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very nice. good luck! -Captain Obvious
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yeah I'm dutch, in dutch it's spelled this way. but it is in fact kinda stupid, thankx for your reaction.
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Aside from a few minor spelling errors, this is really nice! You write so well that the spelling really doesn't detract from it at all. I would just change "hart" to "heart" and then this would be great! Good luck in the contest!
~Robby~
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