I have boobs.
full-size, that guys wish their
slim gals had.
I have real boobs.
boobs that flop to the right
sometimes when the swimsuit doesn't
support just right.
I have kind boobs.
boobs that smile through a lacey bra
and giggle when
embraced into cleavage.
I have supple boobs.
boobs nourished by Victoria's Secret
silky bliss.
I have hips.
hips filling out the
"curvy" jeans that stick-figures
wish they could wear.
I have birthing hips.
hips Ancient Greeks would love to grab
while making love in the grass
in the rain just outside
of the city.
I have full hips.
hips that don't need a belt.
I have happy hips.
hips that giggle as I
walk in high heels, knowing this
is the time they can sway
and seduce him.
I am an hourglass.
I move
with my measures.
Author notes
Written October 31st, 2006
A contest entry
- Poetic Challenge Group... ONLY!!! by luckynsincere.
600 points, ended April 28, 8 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Haha there is just something about this that I love. Great job. Thanks for sharing.
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Its sassy and sexy. It also makes me laugh. I like the birthing hips line, I come from a long line of baby making bodies lol.
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Oh yeah!! That is what I am talking about! Awesome write, and yes I am jealus I want happy hips lol. But again this is an awesome write I really enjoyed it.
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oh !!! YOU!!!!!!!! What a great piece for the contest. AHHH... nothing like a break from the rules, and get a real chance to laugh and giggle. I AM WOMAN!!!! and I hear your roar. I love this... ahhhhhahahahahha I have boobs to, and the smile and giggle. We are blessed, most women can only pray or "pay" for boobs like ours
Well done! I love it. Thanks for the smile today... I may sway abit more today!! lol.
Mel
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Love it!
sometimes i like a woman with a figuire like that, sometimes, well... i just like women...
roflmao
good luck in the contest!
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Wonderful edit!
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oh thank you!!! I appreciate your feedback!!
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OMG!
*curvy jeans, THAT stick figures*
OK....except for the very last line....this is indeed a winner of thought, creativity and lasting impression FOR SURE!
LMBO!
I am delighted at some of the entries you Poets are bringing us during your little contest here......you have all made me laugh, think, and actually giggle right along side of your entries :)
This entry is of no exception when it comes to originality and powerful expression :)
I will not critique this as I normally would in a Round....but to let you know my lasting thought....>>>>>>
Hysterically invigorating!
Loved it!
....and good luck to you in this contest,
Bear ~
Score: 98.6
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question
so the last line - can you tell me why you think it's a bad line, or is it just too different from the rest of the poem? thanks
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Hi :)
I just did not think it was as brilliant as the rest of your write, and did not fit into the genre or Tone of the rest of your write.....but maybe it's a ME thing
...and don't forget to place *that* after jeans.....I do believe it was meant to have it there ~
Be well and have a grrreat Sunday!
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hi
I changed the last line - and did a few tweaks...
Do you think I should just leave the last line as "I am an hourglass"
(I'm not asking this for a better 'grade' in the contest - I'm really interested in critique)
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I see this was 2006... and I wondered, was it when your hips began to grow boobs? (joke!) Yes, curves that drive guys wild... (nature works in mysterious ways...)
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Hehe a fab piece, very well said. Bout time curves were on display...so to speak
Superbly penned, good luck
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I WANT YOU!
lol...this poem makes me want you...its weird...lol...great imagery...I could see your boobs and your hips...nice work...
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heheh well, thank you
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this was awesome. i loved it...
i have huge boobs and hips too man. i think the boobs are giving me back issues though...
very creative. KICKASS!
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I never really thought of boobs in that way.....nice work
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I love this! It's so positive, reinforcing, and very true. A very awesome write.
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now this is an awesome write, outstanding poetry not over the top but right at the summit, excellent piece of work, loved it.
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The humor is hidden in this pretty little piece of work...I loved reading it...I too have boobs...lol...womanly boobs..enjoyed this read, thanks for sharing
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**STANDING ON MY BED TO APPLAUD** I loooove this piece... especially about the boobs floppin to the right...mine happen to be DDD's... so I'm feelin' this for sure!!!! Great write!!!
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Just goes with what I keep telling my wife, that real women have curves... lovely way to express it.
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Bravo
Hello PE,
...knowing this
is the time they can sway
and seduce him.
I am an hourglass...
I love these lines! Stick figures are for a kindergarten age childs drawing pads. Give me a woman who is shaped like a woman, (not a pre-pubescent boy,) any day! Womaen like Marilyn Monroe, Jennie Shrimpton, Kirstey Alley; I never understood the facination with Twigy and the 'concentration camp' look. Forgive me, but a boss that I had when I was a teenager put it this way "She's broad, where a broad, should be broad." I guess I like women who are built for comfort not speed." And with that I apppologise for being a pig.
Now aside from my prefereances for the female form, I also like the subtle (but not to) humor, the language choices, erotic but "not up in your face." I love how comfortable you are with your subject matter:
"I have hips," I have (real, kind, supple) boobs.
Very good job, it made me chuckle, smile, and think,
Eyec
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i can't think of the poet, but your work reminds me of her (she wrote an ode to her vagina). but anway, i love this poem's diction and the off-beat and subtle humor.
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*giggles* That is awesome ^_^ Yeah, stick figures wish they could have boobs and hips. I can't really talk, though... I'm just fat
Lovely poem, I enjoyed reading it. Best of luck in that contest.
Coconut
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wow, great!
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Except for super extremes on either end of the spectrum, I've found women attractive who were much thin and much plump...women are attractive by default, and it's all their fault! LOL This is a fun poem, good job.
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I love a gal with a little meat on her bones. This poem is perfect if you would have left out the Victoria Secret stuff. That is all fake and kinda silly. I prefer my women hot and neckid, with a little fresh dew between their legs. None the less, this is a nice write. Great Job! ~PeacE~GarY~
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Ha ha very nicely done. I liked this poem a lot really good job!!!!!!! I got hips and boobs too, all girls wish they had. Lovely work on this poem it was great.
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i really like this one! this is what i thought as i read it. very nicely done. it made me smile so yay.
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Very nice. I like it, poetic AND erotic (reminds me of my girlfriend).
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Yeah, I have boobs and hips too and even though I am fat I still have a pretty curvy figure. I won't shop at Victoria secret though, they are rude to me everytime I go in there.
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LADY!!! I MISS YOU!!!!! MUAAAAAH!!!!
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I really like this one. Really really. Because I have boobs and hips too. I love the positive way you validate these aspects of women's bodies.
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