I honor Vernal Bloom
The Unseen sees youth
with ears wisdom seeks
and lips of sooth
even before you speak.
By God, our tradition
in prose compiles lost
starting with a rendition
that tallies your cost.
We elders avert eyes
from your sheer beauty
as we too cry
for your loyal duty.
You write, yearn, suffer
like an embryo miscarried
for unrequited loves proffers
your passion that tarries.
Your heart so right
dangles from life's tree
deserving true loves bite
you ripen falling free.
For surely God made
all souls turning black
from illicit passions forbade
that piety knows what.
Yet will love catch
protected in his palm
and from smashing snatch
your loving and calm.
Look at the world
the purest love adored
goodness corrupted, evil unfurls
as God is ignored.
I pray to Lord
of Justice and Parity
to hold His sword
for Vernal Bloom's charity.
Yet, here you write
dying with unrequited lust
humble, virginal and contrite
by integrity remade just.
Like a father, I
pray for your happiness
as you struggle vie
with all life's mess.
AT
Author notes
In God's Name, Peace
Dear Vernal Bloom
Everyone should have a great poem made to their name and especially you who do so much for so many others. This is my tribute to your wonderful pure spirit and nature. May God protect your character forever and ever. Ameen. I believe in stopping all scams against children.
AT Alishtari Peace
Written October 31st, 2006
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Wonderful Abdhul....I know Vernal as my niece,and I cannot think highly enough of her...She is my All Poetry niece...I am missing her as she is taking a rest after putting on a contest..She is a sweet flower yet to be picked for the man who deserves such a beauty..inward and outwardly she has impressed me with her kind heartm and reverence for her faith. A wonderful tribute with eloquent words so deserving Vernal!
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Appreciations
Ah Mr. Ishtari! I’m speechless. I’m too surprised to say something. I just know Beauty is in your eyes and you saw everything/everyone beautiful. I honor you more because of gifting smiles to your friends. May Allah give you the best of this world and the next. I appreciate you.
~Massy~
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And indeed youa re an elder in soul, my brother. What is worthier of a poet than to turn to the youth? youa re awesome, my friend.
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This is very beautiful Massy and Mage.
I love this poem. It is very beautiful and very realistic.
The rhyme and word choice are excellent.
I am glad I came across this (how come you did not tell me about it Massy??
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Keep on writing, it was a pleasure reading.
Nooni
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this is a wonderful poem to a person who obviously means alot to you. im sure that your words touched her heart.
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Sighful
And of the unseen each wise youth seeks ageless sooth
AT’s loyalty and Compassion make of him hearts' sleuth
Gee Mage, you and Janet are going to force me to have to start doing 'real' poetry with works like this.
JD
Edited on Oct 31, 10:50 because ''. -
Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari
BRR ASA
Dear Vernal Bloom. I turned my comment into a poem for a wonderful young lady. I pray you like it. Abdul Tawala Ibn Ali Alishtari ASA
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