The girl who seemed unbreakable...Broke
The girl who seemed so strong...Crumbled
The girl who always laughed it off...Cried
The girl who never stopped trying...Finally Quit
The girl who shunned change... did adjust
The girl who look down on others... Lowered Herself
The girl who had it all... Gave a chance to others
The girl who just had to win... Bent and came in second
The girl who was on top... pulled others up with her
The girl who gave advice... let others hold her in their arms
The girl who got the scholarship... stayed back with her best friend
The girl who knew she was right... Saved the argument for never
The girl who was me... didn't want to change
The girl who was me... also knew that she had to
Author notes
by RIP Whoever. turned 12
quote two.
i worked off of it. hope that's legal.
Written October 31st, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- ~qUoTeS~ by Faerie.Princess.
300 points, ended November 8, 2006, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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This is an amazing poem! One of my favorites on here. Reminds me of myself. Awsome write!
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that was amazing.. i actually liked.. and im looking for a negative thing to say.. and sorry.. but i havent found one.. id really like you to change your screename.. but thats off topic.. hey another side note.. i hate it when people leave comments and say.. yeah i know what you were feeling.. yea i felt like that when my dog died (<--------example).. LIKE shUTuP!.. YOU DONT KNOW.. and you sound stupid when you say you do..
id rather they say.. i can realte to the message felt in the poem.. not to the author.. and yes this is a direct hit to those who have already commented like that =).. but anyway back to your poem..it was realy good.. and it didnt rhyme.. and im NOT a big of fan that.. lmao.. but i loved yours.. you made me actually want to read it..lmao can you say ROLE MODEL.. hehe.. keep writing =) -
great poem!
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. oh, that's sad. But I can definitely relate, when you desperately want to stay the same, but know you have to change. I've moved all over, so change became a constant for me. Lovely write, great job sis! 
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i love this and i love how you kept your poem in the style the quote was written.this poem is beautiful and so much emotion and truth in it and im sure lots of girls could relate to this. great poem. good luck in the contest and keep writing
Thankyou For Entering -
awesome poem. I liked this one too....I can relate to this well...nice job. Good luck in the contest.
<3 always
*P*S*
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