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Roses are red

ROSES ARE RED
VIOLETS ARE BLUE
ALL I WANT IS A TRUE LOVE FROM YOU 

ROSES ARE RED
VIOLETS ARE BLUE
THE WITCH PUT A SPELL ON ME
TOO FALL FOR YOU 

ROSES ARE RED
VIOLETS ARE BLUE
I SIT HERE THINKING ABOUT YOU
IF I HAD A CHANCE
I WOULD ASK YOU FOR ONE LAST DANCE
THIS LOVE FROM ME TO YOU
IS VERY PRECIOUS THAT ALL YOU WILL DO
IS SAY LIANA I LOVE YOU
I REALLY REALLY DO. 


ROSES ARE RED
VIOLETS ARE BLUE
BABY ALL I WANT TO DO
IS BE WITH YOU. 

ROSES ARE RED
VIOLETS ARE WHITE
I'LL SEE YOU IN BED
ON SATURDAY NIGHT. 

ROSES ARE RED
VIOLETS ARE BLUE
THEY ARE REALLY SWEET
BUT NOT AS SWEET AS YOU. 

ROSES ARE RED
VIOLETS ARE BLUE
BABY I NEED YOU
AND YOU NEED ME TOO 

ROSES ARE RED
VIOLETS ARE BLUE
BE MINE ALL THE WAY THROUGH

ROSES ARE RED
VIOLETS ARE BLUE
I RAN OUT OF WORDS
AND DON'T KNOW WHAT ELSE TO DO
HERE IS WHERE I SIT
UNTIL NEXT TIME I WILL GIVE ANOTHER HIT

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Written October 30th, 2006

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  • Dwn
    November 28, 2006
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    Funny

    I loved the way you ended this, made me smile really big.....lol

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    November 28, 2006
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    Beautiful

    Beautifully penned Liana Josephine


  • sparkling-assassin
    November 24, 2006

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    Awesome

    Liana,
    This one is awesome The 5th one makes me giggle Lyke i do quite often, Lol, Good poem,
    Love ya,
    MAriah.


  • wings of an angel
    November 22, 2006
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    THis is a very lovely poem you have penned here


  • Poet of Dreams
    November 10, 2006
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    good poem, great ryhmes...why the caps? oh well great job on this one. keep it up

    Great write and God Bless
    ~The Poet of Dreams~
    ~Ben B~


  • Stardust100
    November 8, 2006
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    This is so beautifully romanticaly written with such a youthful essence of delight. I love this piece it is really sweet.


  • ceegeeess
    November 3, 2006
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    Reality in simple words

    "ROSES ARE RED
    VIOLETS ARE BLUE
    THEY ARE REALLY SWEET
    BUT NOT AS SWEET AS YOU. "
    How neatly you have put the real spirit of love , sweet Liana! THE BEAUTY OF FLOWERS OR FOR THAT MATTER < OF NATURE, IS TO INSPIRE THE LOVERS and the love missing these things become stale and not wanted.These are symbolic of love and its exchange. Beautiful poem in catchy words, dear Liana!



  • Findecano
    November 2, 2006
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    Nice...

    I've gotta say you really know how to write poetry. *Is jelous*
    Keep it up...


  • IndividualEleven
    November 2, 2006
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    Thats incredible, love the change, you have great talent, wish i could steal that topic now, oh well, excellent job.


  • IndividualEleven
    November 2, 2006
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    yeah

    very good, not what i expected, enjoyed this very much, only one question, why the one white violet?


  • love me 4 who i am
    November 2, 2006
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    man i can not rhyme like this, i wish i coould but i tried and it dont work


  • NickN
    November 1, 2006
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    An amazing version of a beautiful original. Great job hun, he's lucky to have you.

    -Nick

  • HaRd2SaYhElLo
    October 31, 2006
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    Lovely

    I love this poem it's pretty! lol you havea great talent in twisting the origanls and make it your own!! keep up the good work so heres and applause for you!! lol

  • Buckybearinlove
    October 31, 2006
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    Awesome love it!


  • October 30, 2006
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    this is some awesome writing right here (b^_^)b

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