If the skies come down and
falling stars kill all of my friends,
I will still think of you
You and your grapefruit-tasting kisses
You can always rest on me,
even if I'm dying
Dying to get your grapefruit-tasting kisses
When I'm too busy,
you can hit me, just
to get my attention
back to you
you and your grapefruit-tasting kisses
Don't mind the way I stare at you,
I am waiting for my desire
Don't mind me talking to you,
your moving mouth is that I admire
Don't mind me asking for your attention,
your grapefruit-tasting kisses is what sets me afire
Author notes
1. Love. Something unique. I want you to tell me about a love that can surpass time itself...
I didn't mean it to be so agressive.. I couldn't get the nice one right, so I made it rather violet ..
I love you, GerjoN! BUT DON'T yOU DaRE TO HIT ME! Sannet'll kill you ^^
Not that your kisses taste like grapefruit, I just like the sound of the word (and strawberry is damn cliché)
enjoy
~Omichi
PS: I edited the title, because something went wrong and I put the wrong title on it! SORRY!
Written October 30th, 2006
A contest entry
- This Is NO Ordinary Love... {contest #13} by PerfectImperfection.
300 points, ended November 7, 2006, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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haha, i know no one with that taste.. hmm .. would be funny though XD
I'm not a stalking kind of person,.. I am stalked (A) .. haha. lol .. >< kidding
thanks!!
Omichi -
I really like the opening stanza, as it is certainly 'weird' in a love poem! I must give you credit for being unique. I could almost see you stalking this sweet tasting damsel... I love grapefruit; so that was such a neat way to describe. This is starngely woven, vivid, and quite imaginative. Please don't stalk anyone because they taste like grapefruit!
Thank you for entering! Best wishes!
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