People are all just beings
Likes ants all in a row
Like oars that dip the water
remind me much of toes
Toes are just like fingers
one will flip the bird
like planes in acrobatics
like uncoordinated nerds
Nerds often unpopular
like generic brands
plentiful but never wanted
like drunk and roaming hands
Drunks seem so opinionated
opinions often sold
and every body's got one,
just like assholes
Moral of the story:
People are all just assholes!
LMAO
Author notes
For anyone who may have missed the wit and formatt of this poem, each line is linked by a comment content element. Read it again and think a bit and you should get how each line is connected by it's content to come up with the 'moral of the story' This is not my true opinion of people just a clever little rhyme to make you laugh.
Written October 30th, 2006
A contest entry
- UC (Ultimate Connections) by TheGangstress.
300 points, ended December 9, 2006, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Laughs of Society by bloved.
550 points, ended August 2, 2007, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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hahahahah this was clever....damn very clever
You made some great points...this is what I wanted!
Thanks foe entering and good luck
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And very well, it did make me laugh. This is one of my favorites so far. I loev the rhyme, I love the stanzas, I love the ideas (though not as 'completely different' as I would have liked, but different enough) and I love kind of how you explained the relationship between some of the connections. Very good write, very good. Thank you for following all the rules and entering. GOOD LUCK!
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haha, clever. it made me laugh.
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