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First Spring Rain

In the quiet still of the ebony light, the stars seemed to be asleep as the rain gently trickled down, rolling from roof top to ground.

Its sound was like that of a thousand drums accompanied by the orchestra of chirps emanating from the spring forest that surrounded me.

Ecstatic, I dashed out into its bosom, to what would become a love affair.

As the cold drops hit my hot body, my senses were awakened and aroused.

My lover was everywhere. 

The cold drops began on my head, leaving a cold trail as it seduced my ears, neck and lips.

Filled with joy, my eyes began to tear, running down my face, chasing after and mixing with my secret love.

Spring rain, I see you, and I am glad you came.

Spring rain, I smell you, you are driving me insane.

Spring rain, I feel you, you cool my breath.

The way you roll down my back, hugging me, feeling me, nothing else feels this way.

You are all over me, from my head to my toes.

You are so naughty. O, the way you penetrate my clothes!

When others see me dance with you, what will they think, what will they say?

O, I don't care! Don't you ever go away.

The way you roll on my tongue, the way you swim down my back.

I am going to take my shoes off, and run with you to the clouds and back.

You never say an unkind word, and you're always clean.

You're why my favorite time of year, is the first rain of spring.

Because of you, the flowers and fruit trees bare.

Who then can resist you, when you have so much love to share?

Because of you, the birds sing, and your drops taste so sweet.

I guess it's that love you bring, it's so special and unique.

Why must you go away for so long, why must you come just once a year?

O, spring rain, in my heart you will always be dear.

I love you Spring Rain.....

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Rain
Written October 30th, 2006

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  • Sanshay
    June 22

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    'penetrate your clothes'...mmm sensual thought but the thought of ripping them from a body...that is a better thought i think. I look forward to more of your work.
  • ardentMarch gold member
    February 27

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    very beautiful.......I love this..


  • CianLOVES
    January 9, 2007
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    I like the idea for this poem, I just wish it was better set out! Well done and good luck!

  • In Too Deep1 gold member
    October 31, 2006
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    Thank you Heavenly Angel. Sensuality is a part of all of us and awaits to be unlocked by that special one. There is only one first spring rain,, much like one love.

  • Heavenly Angel
    October 31, 2006
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    Most beautifully wonderful and sensual...loved this! Nothing like a good, rainy day!
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