With the night
Comes my pain
Blood lust for you,
Blood loss from my veins
You're the only one I need
I love you
Now trust in me,
As I trust in you my love,
I won't hurt you.
Being so far away from you
Is killing my soul.
God, I need you to hold me
And tell me everything will be alright
And that you love me
This world means nothing to me
Without you here,
My soul is burning
And my heart feels the sorrow
Every time the moon rises.
Author notes
I wrote this while I was at a drill compition at NMMI (New Mexico Military Institute)I was staying at the Days Inn hotel and I was listing to "Bitemarks And Bloodstains" by Finch and I kind of broke down and wrote this.
Bitemarks and Bloodstains - Finch
Meier, may we be this way forever,
And tell me lover, what will become of the others?
Bones, skin, nails and flesh,
On a bed of "lack of passion",
A medieval consequence.
They worry you with all the talk of how you're not their kind.
Now I'm stealing her body and taking it home.
There is always one more fall.
Maladjusted you must trust me darling.
Subsequently, you see, you deserve more than me.
They bury you while wearing garments of funeral fire.
Now I'm stealing her body and taking it home.
There is always one more fall.
This will hurt you,
It's killing me.
(This is the salt in my side; this is the thorn in my eye)
This will hurt you,
And I will too,
And I will…
Bloodlust, Bloodlust - for this girl
Bloodloss, Bloodloss - fot this boy
Bloodlust, Bloodlust - for this girl
Bloodloss, Bloodloss - fot this boy
This boy...
Another puncture wound
And once again, forgive my sins.
This is forever
Written October 30th, 2006
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this was a beautiful heartfelt poem very nice. and very sad.
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thanks a bunches
I guess two of my friends fighting over their relationship didn't help much at the time being.I guess I'm better now, and thank you for the comforting compliment!
I love you too Antonio,
Alanna -
One of the best
Honey,this makes me so sad,I wish I can be there to hold you,This moment,To see your smile and feel your heart,Just to make you feel better there......,
This is just so touching and very heartfelt,so beautiful within your precious heart,that it will just go inside of you,I try not to cry writing this,but i feel this so much inside,one of the more emotional poem you ever wrote.......,
I think i heard that last year i think,my brother have there cd's,What it is to burn is my favourite song of them,It's like one of the most beautiful and best song ever,I can't describe it,I love it so much and now it's one of my song for you,The star and the part that he screams she burns,that is you hunny,that is your love always and forever......,
I hope you feel better there now........,
Don't cry anymore,Things will get better for you........,
I love you Alanna,
antonio -
i love it! great job by the way this is amber brewer is this alanna?
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