Lead such a malicious massacre cross such sacred grounds.
Slaughtered his ever-faithful militia of the holy praetors without hesitation.
And shattered just as sadly beneath the hand of our sinister lord, shadowed with deception.
Author notes
Sorry, that's the best I've got at six A.M.
Written October 30th, 2006
A contest entry
- Create............................................ by Lavender Butterfly.
300 points, ended October 31, 2006, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Very descriptive and creative. A profound and deep write. Thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest... x Butterfly.
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If this is the best you have at 6 am, I am hoping you never enter a contest at 6 pm which I have already entered...lmbo
this was just outstanding.
best of luck in the contest hun
Suzi -
I have carefully read each poem submitted thus far. Each one brilliant in its own right. Each one telling a sad tale. Good luck. Rosemary
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