A withered petal of a dying blossom.
Fallen from grace, cowering with shame.
All emotions, save hate, drained.
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Lucifer
Written October 30th, 2006
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A contest entry
- Create............................................ by Lavender Butterfly.
300 points, ended October 31, 2006, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow, so short and yet so powerful and emotional. I like it, and the picture match perfectly. This is a well done job! Awesome... what more can I say...
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thank you so much for your comment. i am glad you liked this piece. thanks again. cheers
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hey baby,this is good..i mis u
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Very expressive and great use of imagery. Thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest... x Butterfly.
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well alrighty then... you get my first applause of the day... this was absolutely breathtaking. very well done dear.
best of wishes in the contest, am sure you are a contender for this one.
Hugs, Suzi -
Stunning. I really love this take on the picture supplied. Your poem as vivid imagery and tells a sad tale. Truly like this piece. Rosemary
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