Life
Is like water
When you’re parched it can save you
Or it can sweep you away
When you’re dehydrated
And you see water ahead
You drink to live again
But there’s the possibility that…
White grains that float there;
Invisible
Drinking them
Exacerbates the underdog
The water is there
Whether you drink it or not,
Is up to you
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Written October 29th, 2006
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Makes Me Thirsty
This was great. Makes one think about how pure the water is we drink everyday. Very original poem. I like that!! Keep up the great writes. Take care, Sandy
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so it is up to you to take life and run with it grab hold with both hands five it a good shake and roll with it. The issue of water is becomming very important as a political platform with the global warming and lack of rain here in Australia yet in other lands there are floods. There are many layers to this write deep and profound it challenges the reader to think and i like that in a post. Good flow and imagery
thank you for a pleasure to read.
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