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thoughts on love


"But I love him"

written in large looping letters.
Impermanent dry erase marker
fleetingly exposes someone’s heart.
Seeing it, upon my return in early morning
how could I not think of you?
As we spent the night dancing
someone left this note for me.
Perhaps I will never know who
or why my door was chosen.
Or could it be meant to make me wonder
if these words could apply to me?

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Written October 29th, 2006

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  • gmr2broadway
    November 9, 2006
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    this is really well done, babe. so college-y