I feel so sad
When i see a friend mad.
It's like they're trapped
in a cave with wild bats
Then I think, put yourself their shoes.
What would they do.
But where there's a will, there's a way.
Then they'll be happy some day.
Author notes
i wrote this poem due to the fact that when ever i felt a certain way and everybody else felt opposite to what i felt.
Written October 29th, 2006
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i noticed you choose the poertry to rythem to be
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this poem has potential but the rhyming sceehme reads a little off...i suggest keeping in mind the dept of this poem to have a rytem of
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b
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