The weight of the world
Is no longer on my shoulders
No longer do I worry about what others say
Or what they think
I'm happy with who I am
As for the drama
I just brush that off
There's no need for me to get
Wrapped up in that like a blanket anymore
The only tears I cry now
Are the tears of joy, for no longer do I have sorrow
The eyes that used to show the pain
Of a painful past
Now sparkle with the promises of tomorrow
And now I can let people in my heart
To show them the real me
And share a real smile
With genuine happiness
Now that I've let go of the past
To go on today
And face the future
Without any fear or doubt
Is no longer on my shoulders
No longer do I worry about what others say
Or what they think
I'm happy with who I am
As for the drama
I just brush that off
There's no need for me to get
Wrapped up in that like a blanket anymore
The only tears I cry now
Are the tears of joy, for no longer do I have sorrow
The eyes that used to show the pain
Of a painful past
Now sparkle with the promises of tomorrow
And now I can let people in my heart
To show them the real me
And share a real smile
With genuine happiness
Now that I've let go of the past
To go on today
And face the future
Without any fear or doubt
Author notes
Most of you know about how I've been struggling with depression and not having really too much peace within myself and all that other stuff. I wrote this before I went to my last counseling appointment before I go to college
Enjoy.
Written October 29th, 2006
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I know I commented before on this poem but read it again and want to tell you how happy and proud I am you have come so far in your life and your faith. You are a beautiful AP daughter. Love you so much. I hope you start to write soon. I know how busy you are. Always know you are in my thoughts and prayers.
God Bless you, Mom
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love it
nice i like it. I wish i had good slf esteem. But yea really awsome and god bless. -
Darling - be counselled and be better. College is a BIG good fresh start. Be who you'd most like to be. My money's on you wanting to be yourself. Above all, be you cos you're gorgeous and be you and be happy. That's a fucking order - love, the bad mouth mummy!! (Know this sounds really terrible, but I have 3 teenage kids and I understand that life is really hard for so long and then it just bloody well gets harder....) Get out there and trust yourself. xx
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LOVELY POEM !!!!!!!
Dear Shannon, Well this is such a pleasure to read my dear daughter. You have your new found confidence to go off to college now. WOO HOO!!! My heart and love will be right there with you. I am so proud of you . You have been like a daughter to me. We have laughed,, we have cried and prayed together. May you life always be blessed with your wishes coming true. I am always here for you. Love you a bunch!!! MOM
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Well, finding peace within yourself is hard, but this confidence is something that I've been needing and now that I've got it I'm not letting go
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I really REALLY like this
but almost noone is at opeace with themsleves but I like this new self cofidence you ahve taken on hearts;
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yea thats a way of looking at it. glad that you liked it
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wicked
i like this, well done, its a total screw you, nice going
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