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Sting

I wake up,
See her picture in my head,
And I'm reminded again,
As if a picture could,
Slap you in the face as hard as reality does,
And then,
I remember all the arguing,
And all that was said,
Or wasn't,
Then everything coming to a crashing halt,
It's over,
Your emotions tying in knots,
And your voice crackles from screaming your lungs out,

It's like,
The weight on your shoulders,
Just won't come off,
And you,
Bury yourself in work,
Uncaring that at home you,
Bury yourself in a bottle,
Trying to drown it out,
Your voice never leaving me alone,
And I stare off in into space,
A prisoner inside of my own home,

We had each other,
Someone to count for something,
You know that person who you could talk to about ANYTHING,
Well, WHERE THE HELL IS THAT!

Anything I get now, is awkward,
Like seeing your boss at a strip club,
Everything forced and no more reaction,
It's like we're fucking robots!

What the hell happened to us?

Author notes

Look, I know it's sappy, but please don't judge me harshly right now. It's choppy, I know. But, have a little sympathy on this one.
Written October 29th, 2006

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  • Lilith Greywing
    November 7, 2006
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    Cheer up, EMO Kid, it's Friday! (okay, not re

    Listen up and listen well. If "she" broke your heart then why didn't you tell her? "She" still cares about you, but "she" doesn't know how to be with anyone like that. You're stronger than this, okay? I like the write, but you really need to get over her and start new, okay?

  • Enter Dumb Phrase
    November 4, 2006
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    very good

    I can feel strong emotion in this Teej.
    I like many lines in it such as:

    "As if a picture could,
    Slap you in the face as hard as reality does"

    "Anything I get now, is awkward,
    Like seeing your boss at a strip club,"

    I'm sorry she broke your heart.
    But I love your poetry no matter what. This one is very raw, which I like.

    Love you,

    Mia.

  • Fallen Hard
    October 29, 2006
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    Tj...this is really good.. love this alot! Keep it up!
    Love ya!
    Lexie